1: HOW TO DO IT: The signs... () are for thoughts or whispers. ~~ are for actions. Bold is for narration.
Bowser: I'm an example! ~punches you in the face~ (that punch was awesome!)
The narrator also thinks it was an awesome punch.
Other uneccesary codes: underline is for Meanwhiles and such. Italic is dreams or written things.
2: Do not be random or unreal. Try being coherent to characters' mind.
3: It is allowed to include persons from this forum, as well as characters from the Mario universe. Purely imagined characters are also accepted. That is, NOTHING LIKE NARUTO OR OTHER UNIVERSES! To avoid onfusion.
4: Do not kill someone just to kill someone. Some people actally wants their character not to die shortly after introduction.
5: Ending notes and such to explain briefly your move are appreciated.
6: If anyone wants to add a character to the BIOs here, PM me (or just mention it). This BIO section is meant to explain to newbes more details of the fanfic, it is therefore not of utemost importance. Also, if someone doesn't understand something, PM me or simply ask.
7: To avoid ninja'd-ness, post your post and then write your move (It glitched on SMWC, but here, it probably won't)
SO YES. I've decided to start this thing, someone had to. And so far, I ain't including any characters as such as Tama. You can, though, but I don't think you will anyway. ANYWAY...
Sometime, in the present, Somewhere, in a dark mountain void of almost all life, lies a castle, a dark castle, and there even is dark fog everywhere and purple lightning now and then. Well, you get the idea. Inside, in the throne room, someone lies in the center, thinking about it's situation, on it's dark throne...
Palace: ... Wait, is he coming? Is he coming?! He is late. I thought that someone as important and as fast as him could reach me in time, as in... faster!
A man a little bit taller than Palace, with longer brown hair and light beard was standing beside him. He did seem stronger, and unlike Palace, he was wearing a plated armor. It is Syrys, Palace's friend/servant/acolyte.
Syrys: What have you done exactly now?
Palace: I provoked him.
Syrys: Wait, are you out of your mind? Even together we can't grasp the true forum of giyga-- I mean the incarnation of evil!
Palace: I know what I'm doing, I broke the pact. And stop playing video games, it's messing with you.
Syrys: You BROKE it? How can you do that? Don't you need to do dozens of things like, remove the curse, burn it, cast a sealing spell, send the bits in another dimension and blast them with pure light?
Palace: You forgot check the whole paper with an X using dragon blood and bunch of other things.
Syrys: YOU REALLY DID IT?!
Palace: Ah, of course, I couldn't stand this life anymore, there is no way I could follow him anymore. I need my OWN plans.
Syrys: ~grins~ What kind of plans?
Palace: ~Looks at Syrys and chuckles~ Plans... Serious ones. Don't worry, I'm not mad. My soul has recovered the scares it has beared in the past.
Syrys: Oh, that's wise. ... I sense something.
There was a shockwave a few meters away from the castle and the already dim light grew even weaker.
Palace: It's here... Prepare the Evil traps.
Syrys: Good thing he can't attack us directly...
Palace: There will be guards with him.
Syrys: I ain't affraid of--
There was a smaller shockwave right in front of them, and a red floating eye about their size, which was almost bleeding and had the likes of a cat eye appeared at this moment.
Eye: What have you done...
Palace: I freed myself, it's as simple as it gets.
Eye: Are you sure, you broke the pact?
Palace: Yes, what are you thinking?
Eye: Did you destroy the evil link it had with me before doing so?
Palace: Err... ~his head explodes~
Wait a minute! REWIND!
Palace: Yes I did.
Eye: Dang! I thought that was impossible! GUARDS!
Syrys: Shouldn't we run a little?
Palace: Wait yet.
A hundred of guards came running from the door.
Palace: So you are certain that I absolutly broke the pact?
Eye: We'll see that you fool! Your head will explode if fail you did! ~seems to be concentrating a little, a bunch of guards around him had their heads exploded~ Crap, can't seem to concentrate my forces at you. OH YOU DIRTBAG HAS A REFLECT SPELL CASTED ON YOU!
Palace: Hehehe... ~the spell wears off on it's own~ Too bad it doesn't last forever.
Eye: CATCH HIM AND BRING HIM TO ME DEAD OR ALIVE!
The Guards had some tribal cry and rose their swords in anger before they ran for Palace and Syrys.
Palace: Syrys, wanna have fun.
Syrys: Yeah! ~takes out his sword~ Weak random guards are so easy to beat!
Swords were slashing in the room, heads flyed, Syrys had a bunch of guards catch on fire and others fall in black holes while Palace was subtely destroying the structures of the castle using shards of an unknown alloy with his kynetic powers, until the ceiling fell on all of the guards, teleporting Syrys out of the way before he could die like the bunch of guards that were still alive.
Eye: I'll get you! You can't hide!
Palace: Oh yes I can! ~gets a shiny stone out of his pocket and chants a few words, generating a powerful blast of light which blinded the Eye~ Cool thing I ain't your servant anymore, that thing would've killed me. Isn't that cool?
Syrys: Yeah, and stuff. Now we should pretty much try to run through the secret passage.
Palace: And as fast as possible!
They quickly disappeared in a tunnel that leaded somewhere. What is the eye? What is Palace doing? What is going to happen next? YOU DECIDE!
Last edited by Giga on Sat Mar 28, 2009 3:24 pm; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : grammar and format)